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Post by Matthew McIntyre on Nov 23, 2011 19:27:59 GMT -5
No I wasn't, i was an ATH when i was drafted. After telling me MLB on AIM, I don't care. I never told you MLB. just go play Haxball and blow off some steam  |
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Post by Advantage on Nov 23, 2011 22:26:24 GMT -5
After telling me MLB on AIM, I don't care. I never told you MLB. just go play Haxball and blow off some steam Lol, okay then..I remember what you told me. |
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Post by Matthew McIntyre on Nov 24, 2011 5:31:34 GMT -5
I never told you MLB. just go play Haxball and blow off some steam Lol, okay then..I remember what you told me. and i remember what i said. |
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Post by manningtypeaim on Nov 24, 2011 16:04:01 GMT -5
and i still cant believe it's not butter  |
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Post by diamondace121 on Nov 26, 2011 5:39:37 GMT -5
Content 2/2 Player names? Of course... No more needs to be said
Creativity 1/1 Honestly, I think you deserve a bonus creativity point.
Grammar 1.75/2 About 2/3 of your errors were missing apostrophes from possessives. Other than that, this was solid.
individuals - individual's
players - player's
then - than
fathers - father's
mothers - mother's
Shotty - Fuze (corrected it the first time but missed the second)
preffered - preferred
leagues - league's
4.75/5
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Post by uzi on Nov 26, 2011 6:43:34 GMT -5
Content 2/2 - Nice idea and well executed. No Boom though  Creativity 1/1 - Very creative and interesting. Grammar 1.75/2 - Was pretty good but a few minor errors, as listed above by DA. 4.75/5 If this only needs 2 grades, final grade = 5 |
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